Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Poem THing

Once there was a blessing by a gypsy that made a pyramid a prophet. An infidel, the sheep, was smoking from the sacred hookah when he heard the news he was pissed. Many people thought it was an omen. The sheep bought a crystal from a farmer that turned out to be fake so the sheep became a non believer that day. That's why hes an infidel. And that's the legend of the alien merchant...

2 comments:

  1. What was the blessing? Why was he pissed? (Could you also use another word?) Who are you? You say "I"? It doesn't make much sense. Plus you need to check your spelling. Remember the poem can be about anything, you just have to use some word from the text. It has to make somewhat sense

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  2. that was pretty good and it was kind of funny but it just didnt make sence to me?

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